English cafe a place to eat s.th in English

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Episode 5

It did not take long before coke decided to knock the door, when he surpassingly found it open. Inside, he found himself in a warm, clean room with old-fashioned furniture. He was still surprised when he felt the presence of another person in the room. Frightened he turned around and saw an old woman staring at him. Trying to apologize the old woman told him she was deaf and could not hear people who come around. His cloths were so dirty so that no one could understand that was prison uniform.
Coke made up a story calling himself a mechanic who had an accident.

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my boss is calling
in an hour I will be with you again

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اصلاح خلاصه ارائه شده توسط نارون عزیز




.1 in a cold winter.
at their home

my summary text

nice try
dear narvan

it seems you have some problems in terms of grammar
moreover there is no coherence
you have to practice a lot more
anyway thanx for your answer
it shows your concern about learning

the word marked red are NOT correct

[نارون1]

thanks

but . I dont understand

I had just 2 wrongs

realy ????????

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my summary text

It is six o,clock on a cold winter .
While all of the people in England are resting in their home , they listening to a hot news . " a man escaped from prison and many policemen are looking for him .Coke is pursue ."

Yes , he successed to escap from prison .

A richman named of Master that Coke know him , listened this news too and though deeply .
In other place , a policeman named of Baxter that arrested Coke for years ago , intended find him immediately .

listening to hot news
ذکر نام زندان در اینجا الزامی است
coke is pursue اشتباهه
coke is reported fugitive
لحن داستان نریشن third personاست و نیازی ب خطاب قرار دادن مخاطب نیست پس
Yes , he successed to escap from prison
از نظر لحنی درست نیست


richman named Master
heard the news
thouht
other place
was asked to catch coke

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so how about the riddle
nobody did it
why was it so difficult

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thanks

but . I dont understand

I had just 2 wrongs

realy ????????

mistakes

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lets have some slangs

[نارون1]

thanks

I dont know , what should I do
I am very careless