English cafe a place to eat s.th in English

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It is six o,clock on a cold winter .
While all of the people in England are resting in their home , they listening to a hot news . " a man escaped from prison and many policemen are looking for him .Coke is pursue ."

Yes , he successed to escap from prison .

A richman named of Master that Coke know him , listened this news too and though deeply .
In other place , a policeman named of Baxter that arrested Coke for years ago , intended find him immediately .

nice try
dear narvan

it seems you have some problems in terms of grammar
moreover there is no coherence
you have to practice a lot more
anyway thanx for your answer
it shows your concern about learning

the word marked red are NOT correct