Write whatever you want

[armin_gera]

hot is no thing
im boiling here
in English جهنم idont know what is
but its the same as it
anyway we should tolerate
forget about the weather every where is warm
now how are u doing with holidays
do u have any plan to travel or picnic
and do u take part in learning English classes
if u do name the institute
thanks so much

[Arash.All]

hot is no thing
im boiling here
in English جهنم idont know what is
but its the same as it
anyway we should tolerate
forget about the weather every where is warm
now how are u doing with holidays
do u have any plan to travel or picnic
and do u take part in learning English classes
if u do name the institute
thanks so much

جهنم Hell is suitable for

[saba azad]

in my opinien this topic is
interesting

it helps me very much i extremely grate ful of you for all aids that you have given me &

sincerely yours

saba

[Arash.All]

Hi saba, welcome to njavan website, yes this topic is one of the helpful ones for learning english & increase your knowledge while reading or writing english .
There's some little issues in your writing, they aren't serious , however it's important to know

1 ) Opinein is not right, use Opinion
2 ) There's no space between Grate and Ful, right is grateful, however in this situation it's better to use appreciate instead of grateful

[matrix]

hot is no thing
im boiling here
in English جهنم idont know what is
but its the same as it
anyway we should tolerate
forget about the weather every where is warm
now how are u doing with holidays
do u have any plan to travel or picnic
and do u take part in learning English classes
if u do name the institute
thanks so much

Hi my friend
I actually have no plan to pass the holidays

You know I am a little bit busy
So, It's better to do my works instead going for sightseeing

Even I have enough time to go to any class

[امین_بد]

at first tnx u for your good topic
i dont know what can i say ?
you said about "LOVE"
a word full of meaning
i think we cant talking about this word easily
its a great feeling that these days getting dirty with lust...
love is rare ....

. you had mate a mistake in your topic
in line 5
you wrote i think we can't talking
but it is wrongyou had to write simple words after auxiliary verbs.
I think we can't talk
right??????

[matrix]

in my opinien this topic is
interesting

it helps me very much i extremely grate ful of you for all aids that you have given me &

sincerely yours

saba

Thanks to let us know your opinion

I am so happy you like this topic
You can practice English by talking here

[matrix]

Hi saba, welcome to njavan website, yes this topic is one of the helpful ones for learning english & increase your knowledge while reading or writing english .
There's some little issues in your writing, they aren't serious , however it's important to know

1 ) Opinein is not right, use Opinion
2 ) There's no space between Grate and Ful, right is grateful, however in this situation it's better to use appreciate instead of grateful

Thanks for helping Saba

[matrix]

. you had mate a mistake in your topic
in line 5
you wrote i think we can't talking
but it is wrongyou had to write simple words after auxiliary verbs.
I think we can't talk
right??????

Hi
Yeah that's right
We can not use verb+ing after can

[armin_gera]

i have an idea
it can improve our English
i will upload a song here
you will listen and you will try to understand it then you will write the lyrics here and i will take a look at youre lyric and if it had some problems i will warn you
it can improve youre English sooooooooooooo much
after one week when almost all of you listened it i will up load the right lyric here

i wanted to start a new topic for this but first lets see how many answers will i have
if the answers will be more than 5
i will start a new topic with your help

for beginning i want you to listen one of these songs
((who is it)) is a bite difficult
but ((You Are Not Alone)) is easy

WHO IS IT
http://dc112.4shared.com/download/hIbG02HS/Michael_Jachson_-_Who_is_it.mp3?tsid=20100810-111223-3052928e

YOU ARE NOT ALONE
http://dc122.4shared.com/download/QQl9WkIQ/You_Are_Not_Alone_-_Michel_Jac.mp3?tsid=20100810-111529-73b321c4